posted by dave on Sunday, January 23, 2005 at 11:58 PM in category ramblings

Was it the first time you saw her smile?


How about the first time you heard her laugh?

Nope. Not then either.

The first time you were disappointed that she wasn't there?


The first time you smelled her hair?

Not yet.

The first time she touched you, hugged you, kissed you?

No, no, and no.

The first time you woke up next to her, and watched her as she slept?

Not even then.

How about when you first heard her cry?

That's when it happened. That's when I knew I was in trouble.

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